Monday, June 27, 2011

In-progress critiques Assignment 5

Subtle Disruptions of a Place



Surrealism- Dreams

6 comments:

  1. I like the way you have manipulated the colors in the last photograph -- it really goes with your surrealist theme.

    I agree -- when the top two images are changed to black and white the objects are harder to distinguish. I think the top one looks a lot better in terms of light now, too.

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  2. I like the dream photographs a lot...it makes me squint and try to 'see' the dream..
    I like the top two pictures in black and white because it disguises them more

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  3. I like the one with the curtain thing but I would bring the girl out just a tad because I didn't even see it until you said she was there. I think the black and white works really well for the first two!

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  4. I really like the one of you behind the sheer fabric...at first I thought it was just fabric, I didn't notice you were there until I blew it up. I like what happens because you kind of just appear. I think you could maybe bump up the fill light because it feels a little dark. (I don't know if you meant it to be that way though.) Nice job ;)

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  5. I still really love your concept for the first group. But I guess you may can try to make the whole picture colored but use photoshop to make the "outsider" which should not be there black and white to help showing your idea.
    I like the color of the last picture but it is a little bit too dark to see the details.

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  6. I like the fabric pictures they are dream like maybe play with more lighting on those. for the others objects in unusual places I like the color but may you lighting would make a difference.

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